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Thursday, 13 October 2016

Synonyms run

WALT:Follow the structure of the poem for our own synonym poem
 
               RUN Synonyms
          
                         I’m talking run!
                       I’m talking sprint!
                    I’m talking dash, race,
                                Hurry!
                    I’m talking dart, rush,
                            Bolt, flash!
                    I’m talking zip, jog,
               Zoom, speed, charge, shoot!  
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Wednesday, 12 October 2016

WALT: recraft our writing

WILF: hook
         Show not tell
    
OMG!! This is scary being on an elephant is like being at the to of the ladder. I hope I didn't fall off. Mum and Dad were yelling Hold on. The elephant started walking, it made me sway side to side. This is the best day ever.