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Wednesday, 12 October 2016

WALT: recraft our writing

WILF: hook
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OMG!! This is scary being on an elephant is like being at the to of the ladder. I hope I didn't fall off. Mum and Dad were yelling Hold on. The elephant started walking, it made me sway side to side. This is the best day ever.

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