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Thursday, 13 October 2016

Synonyms run

WALT:Follow the structure of the poem for our own synonym poem
 
               RUN Synonyms
          
                         I’m talking run!
                       I’m talking sprint!
                    I’m talking dash, race,
                                Hurry!
                    I’m talking dart, rush,
                            Bolt, flash!
                    I’m talking zip, jog,
               Zoom, speed, charge, shoot!  
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Wednesday, 12 October 2016

WALT: recraft our writing

WILF: hook
         Show not tell
    
OMG!! This is scary being on an elephant is like being at the to of the ladder. I hope I didn't fall off. Mum and Dad were yelling Hold on. The elephant started walking, it made me sway side to side. This is the best day ever.

Wednesday, 24 August 2016

Bananas

WAL: facts about bananas and writing a report
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1.Bananas do not grow from a seed.

2.Bananas grow in 150 countries.

3. There are 1000 types of bananas.

4.Bananas are the most popular fruit in the world.          

5.Bananas are berries.

6.Bananas are the  healthiest fruit.

Wednesday, 17 August 2016

Frog





Pattern poems

WALT: use Interesting adjectives in poetry writing

Frog

Green frog

Poisonous frog

Warty frog

Fat, jumpy frog

Ugly frog

Colourful, croaking frog.

Tuesday, 9 August 2016

Persuasive writing

Persuasive writing
Walt: convince our  audience

Opinion - I really think room 3 deserves to go on a trip to Auckland.

Reason - We have worked very hard to improve our reading, writing and maths and we should celebrate our .

Example - My reading was at 11 yrs old and now it is at 12 years old. I was below national standards at the beginning of the year and now I am above standard.

Opinion - This is why I believe we deserve to go on an end of year trip.